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I could lose you by jonjacobsen I could lose you by jonjacobsen
I think the black border makes the picture look better...

The girls are A and
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Title by Stereophonic.




p.s I noticed this is my first picture of someone smoking... ja!
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:iconthe-scaredcrow-riots:
The-ScaredCrow-Riots Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
There's so much emotional depth in this photo. A full story told in a single shot.
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NivaSimon Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2008  Professional Photographer
very good. the black borders makes it look like a frame from a film.
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:iconpoisons-toad:
Poisons-Toad Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2008
it's great, with this title the picture gets another look
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:iconfoliesaine:
FolieSaine Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2008
Bravo!
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:iconv00d00cita:
v00d00ciTa Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
enquadramento interessante!
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:iconsocial-disaster:
Social-Disaster Featured By Owner May 10, 2008
THAT IS SO SO STRONG!
Bravo man!
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:iconsnowfight:
Snowfight Featured By Owner May 3, 2008
love the angle
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:iconperfect-sky:
perfect-sky Featured By Owner May 2, 2008   Photographer
So beautiful, lovely pose
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:icon7oran:
7oran Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2008
Cool shot.:)
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:iconeatmydreams:
EatMyDreams Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2008
Hermosa imagen, parece tomado de una película, un screen cap, deberías intentarlo, seguro lo harías bien :)
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:iconjonjacobsen:
jonjacobsen Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2008  Professional Photographer
algúúún dia, gracias :D!
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:iconskeev:
skeev Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008
I'm loving the way this picture remind of a movie still. Could be some drama about teens doing drugs. You can almost hear them talk while you're watching the photo. One thing you could notice is how the model's belly looks like, it's usually something you'd want to look good, especially when the girl isn't fat at all. So breathe in first girls! :)
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:iconjonjacobsen:
jonjacobsen Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2008  Professional Photographer
thanks :)
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shadowblade6 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008
I really like the lighting in this photo, is this an early morning shot? because it feels cold to me, and early mornings always have this kind of a cold feel as far as I know. The smoke kind of hanging out of her mouth really adds something to the overall, it's a very nice shot :)
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:iconjonjacobsen:
jonjacobsen Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2008  Professional Photographer
i took it at 6pm. almost sunshine :D
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badlydrawndoll Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008  Professional Photographer
I like the black border :) Looks like a film still :)
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:iconohmascarade:
ohmascarade Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008  Student
You can tell that you've burned in the front girls leggings... there's clear black spots on her legs. You might want to calibrate your monitor and re-edit the picture. I don't understand why other people haven't noticed this.
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:iconjonjacobsen:
jonjacobsen Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008  Professional Photographer
Yes, i noticed them when you told me :)..
Just for curiosity, what kind of monitor you have??
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:iconohmascarade:
ohmascarade Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2008  Student
I use a macbook pro monitor, and my brightness adjusts with ambient light.. it's most likely that I pick up on inconsistencies.
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DarlingLittleZombie Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008
I love yoouuuu. :( I wish I could model in one of your amazing pictures. Also I always love the sky in your pictures. Eveerrry time haha<3
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wzrdofozfan Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008
The frames make it look like a movie.
Great shot.
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:iconcantankerousness:
Cantankerousness Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008
It reminds me of all the 1980s movies from Argentina I used to watch with my uncle when I was little.

Very nice.
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:iconjonjacobsen:
jonjacobsen Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008  Professional Photographer
nice to read that :D
thanks!
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:iconbittersweet-insanity:
bittersweet-insanity Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008  Student
the composition is perfect
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:icontragedies:
tragedies Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008
i like the pop of colors, against the neutral surrounding area. and the black border makes the photo look like a scene from a movie.
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:iconruthey:
ruthey Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008
i think the black border makes it look very epic and movie-esque...
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:iconviva-la-dodis:
Viva-la-Dodis Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008
I think this has definite potential.

You should definitely do one similar to this but with a guy and a girl.
I really like this.
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:iconjonjacobsen:
jonjacobsen Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008  Professional Photographer
i dunno, maybe it would look two common like "oh boy, i could lose you". Two girls can tell you more histories :D
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:iconviva-la-dodis:
Viva-la-Dodis Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2008
True dat.
You're quite the thinker.
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:iconcromosoma:
CROMOsoma Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008
me encanto la exprecion de la mina que fuma , te dice todo , super wena foto :)
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:iconjonjacobsen:
jonjacobsen Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008  Professional Photographer
gracias :D
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:iconbaskus:
BaSkuS Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008
i'm not sure about posing of smoking girl.. anyway cropping is very nice :D
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:iconjonjacobsen:
jonjacobsen Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008  Professional Photographer
okay, thanks :)
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:iconmysteary:
mysteary Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008
awesome...
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PlastikNeon Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008  Student
really awesome.
Liking the black border too
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doganphotography Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008
Hey Jonathan,it s really good work,and what a amazing colours...really :heart: it!..congratulations !
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:iconjonjacobsen:
jonjacobsen Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008  Professional Photographer
thanks :)
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:iconadour:
ADOUR Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
looks like a screet shot of Almodovar :D
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:iconjonjacobsen:
jonjacobsen Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008  Professional Photographer
I haven't seen that movie yet! :(
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:iconadour:
ADOUR Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
I didn't talk about an exact movie. I said your shot was similar to those Almodovar's :)
I think he is a great director :clap:
So this shot is really cool :D
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jonjacobsen Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008  Professional Photographer
oh hahah xD
I only know the names in spanish, and you know... when they translate the titles, they put something very different than the real name. So i thought you were talking about a new movie or something like that haha, silly me :D

Almodóvar is amazing, and i'm very grateful someone commented something like this on my picture! :hug:
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ADOUR Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
:love:
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:iconmitpie:
mitpie Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008
great. love the edit, what did you do to the colors?
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:iconjonjacobsen:
jonjacobsen Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008  Professional Photographer
i don't remember exactly what i did, but in short words, i put a neutral color on the image, then raised the pinks and purples and added a green tone in the shadows :)
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:iconmitpie:
mitpie Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008
i love it, the mood of the shot is...yeah. another great one from you:)
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fashionablyloud Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008
nicee. :heart: the color.. :)
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:icontrance-vania:
Trance-Vania Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2008
Really nice!
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:iconminix00:
MINIX00 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2008
i love the realism of this photo... awesome...
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caramel26 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2008
o rly? this is ur first time take picture of someone smoking? waaaa u're like...experience almost anything i suppose but anyway, this one's great. color love:heart:
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jonjacobsen Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2008  Professional Photographer
well.. past time i was like "oh, you could smoke a bit to take you a picture" but the images sucked... and i erased them immediately
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Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XT
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18 mm
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100
Date Taken
Apr 27, 2008, 6:46:03 PM
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